Oklahoma Book Review: TOBY

Today I have the honor of participating in another first – a blog tour – in celebration of TOBY, a new picture book by Oklahoma author Stacy Nyikos.

Stacy A. Nyikos

This was of particular interest to me because I read another of her books, DRAGON WISHES (lent to me and as-of-yet not returned to Gayleen Rabakkuk, but I digress). Anyway, I liked that book very much, even though it hasn’t yet gotten reviewed on this blog.

Does it help my case to announce that today, I just got to 20K on my latest novel? That means My lackadasical approach to blogging isn’t just laziness, right?

Anyway. Back to the book!

Toby will be released on June 30, 2014.

Toby will be released on June 30, 2014.

TOBY tells the story of a newly hatched sea turtle who finds himself alone in the nest and unsure what to do next. After listening to his heart, he follows his instincts out to the open ocean.On the way, the little guy faces dangers in the form of a pelican, crab, and crocodile. Illustrations by Shawn Sisneros compliments Nyikos’ story with images set on the sandy beach and in the bright blue ocean. TOBY is the third book in her Under the Sea series.

TOBY is available for pre-purchase on Amazon – when I checked, there were only two left, so keep that in mind. You can find out more about Stacy at her website, www.stacynyikos.com!

 

2014 Oklahoma Book Award

Do you know Tammi Sauer?

I do.

Since I’m a cool member of the Oklahoma Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, I got to meet Tammi about a year ago. She’s incredible, and published, and comes to Schmoozes, and is possibly the most currently-in-demand famous person I know.

I mean, I’ve met/know some other people I consider well-known, but Tammi is the one who might actually comment on something I’ve posted on Facebook, or if I called her up and said, “Hey, this is Regina Garvie,” she would know who I was. (Yes, I would definitely still say my last name. We are friendly but not besties or anything.) (And yes, I wanted to put we are “friends” but then I got scared that she would read that and say that we’re totally acquaintances but no, not friends so I changed it.)

Anyway, Tammi is awesome, and this month, she received the Oklahoma Book Award for her new picture book, Nugget & Fang, which I love and have already talked about on here. Here’s a picture of all the award winners for this year.

She’s the cute one with dark hair in the front row. I like how she’s holding her medal with both hands.

I don’t have much else to say about that, except for to mention that I hope that one day I’ll be in a picture holding a medal like that (except I will totally get into the back row if I can help it, because I’m a back row kinda gal.)

Oh, and Nugget & Fang is also a finalist for the SCBWI Crystal Kite Awards, which is also a huge deal, so good luck vibes for Tammi, please!

In related news, I did read Tammi’s book, Chicken Dance, this week, after seeing it mentioned on a Sequoyah Award poster at the library. Somehow I’d never read this one, even though I read the sequel, Bawk & Roll, more than a year ago.

I read this one to my six-year-old today, and she immediately demanded that I “read it again!” so that’s obviously a positive review.

From the book’s description on Amazon: Meet Marge and Lola, chickens on a mission: to win tickets for the Elvis Poultry Show! But their toughest competition—a pack of menacing ducks—sneers that “all a chicken can do is bawk, flap, and shake.” Can our two feisty chicks show those quackers how to rock ’n’ roll the barnyard? Tammi Sauer and Dan Santat have whipped up a giddy, goofy romp where cows fly over the moon, ducks surf in a water trough, and one very familiar-looking rooster gets all shook up!

This was a really cute book. Having been a chicken and duck owner for many years, I enjoyed all the little jokes…especially when the chickens starting doing “what chickens do.” Good thing, too, since I’m sure I’ll have to read it several more times for my youngest. This is the kind of book that I don’t have a problem repeating. And repeating.

My Girlfriend Bites

Doing good. Got a new car (after the old van died in our driveway after critique group). End of the school year is pressing into us from every direction. My to-do list has thirty-some things on it, not including writing. So of course writing comes first. At least I’m successfully ignoring the siren song of tumblr.

I’ve been reading a little lately. I started A Clash of Kings by George RR Martin and began reading the manuscript of my friend Jeannie. (And that reminded me that I’ve been meaning to order Jeannie’s published book from Amazon, so I just now did that.)

I also read My Girlfriend Bites, by Doug Solter, which has been chilling on my kindle FOREVER.

My Girlfriend Bites puts a new twist on the paranormal young adult theme. Instead of the male character being the vamprire/werewolf/zombie/whatever, it’s the girl who is the werewolf. The story starts out being told from the guy’s point of view, which is a refreshing change from the books I normally read. Later, it transitions to the girl’s viewpoint. It was fun to get in her head, both in her human form and as a wolf.

Book description, from Amazon: After his “dream” girl rejects him, 16-year-old Aiden tries to commit suicide, yet mysteriously survives. Now the teen feels like a loser with zero possibility of finding a girl. Then during a rainstorm, the creepy teen girl at school with too much hair offers him a ride home. Bree Mayflower’s act of kindness surprises Aiden as the two teens feel an attraction to each other that sparks a romance. Bree soon reveals her deep, dark secret to Aiden. Her family are werewolves hiding from the Demon Skins, a mysterious new enemy killing all the werewolf packs on earth. Aiden struggles with his girlfriend being a shifter while Bree struggles with helping her boyfriend whose lack of self-worth and cowardice puzzles a girl werewolf. Can she rely on him if the Demon Skins ever discovered her family? Will Aiden be there when she needs him? It would be so easy to just turn him into a fearless werewolf. But that bite thing is only a myth. All Bree can do is hope that the boy she loves will be strong enough to believe in himself when the time comes.

This was a fun read and passed by quickly. It was quite a bit different from Doug’s other YA novel, Skid, but I enjoyed both of them. I don’t read a lot of indie authors – since you generally have to order them sight unseen, it’s a gamble to spend money on these books. I’ve gotten a few that didn’t have a real grip on grammar, or that didn’t have fully developed characters. But Doug’s books are worth reading.

Doug’s from the Tulsa area, so we’ve seen each other at a couple of statewide conferences and we’re online friends. Because of that, I know that he’s currently working on a sequel for Skid, which I’m looking forward to. I also notice that on Amazon, My Girlfriend Bites has Volume 1 after the title. I don’t remember that being there before, but it’s good news to me. It’s always a pleasure to spend more time with characters you’ve enjoyed.

Anyhoo…recommended.

 

Review day…

So, I’ve been thinking about this since yesterday. This is Wednesday, the day I said I’d write a review of a book by an Oklahoma author.

But instead I say, not today, legions of desperate fans. I’m working on my own novel today, so maybe someday I’ll find a (hopefully) pleasant review of my work online.

One problem is, I’ve waited so long. Yeah. I know. I should have written them right away. But I was working on another novel then, and the books were good to read, so I didn’t want to write a review. I wanted to read the next one.

So. Maybe next week. If you’re lucky.

Back to my work in progress, The Rat Queen.

Hey, it’s Thursday

So…Thursday. And I said I’d do a review every Wednesday. I totally forgot about it until just now.

I do have the very good excuse of terrible allergies slash editing, but…

Anyway. I still have more editing to do, so I’m gonna have to just fail this week and come back with a bang next Wednesday. Right.

Blogging and things

I’m sort of disappointed with my blogging lately. I’ve been busy, really, doing stuff for our local SCBWI chapter in anticipation of this weekend’s spring conference, and revising manuscripts and working on my newest novel.

But I really did want to read and review books by Oklahoma authors, and that has fallen more and more by the wayside.

And the hundred journal entries project? As if.

However, I seem to have lots of spare time to spend on tumblr. Research. Learning how teens interact. Riiiiiight.

So. First things first, I’m going to go back and see what Oklahoma authored books I’ve read and not got around to reviewing. Then I’m going to tackle them, one by one.

  1. TOGETHER ALONE by Caitlyn Hensley
  2. HEREAFTER by Tara Hudson
  3. EXTRAORDINARY JANE by Hannah Harrison
  4. THE GRAVE ROBBER’S SECRET by Anna Myers
  5. AFTER OBSESSION by Carrie Jones and Steven E. Wedel
  6. DRAGON WISHES by Stacy Nyikos
  7. SPOTTING THE LEOPARD by Anna Myers
  8. SNOT STEW by Bill Wallace

I think I’m forgetting some.

Also…literally sitting right next to me, ready to be read:

  1. COWBOY CAMP by Tammi Sauer
  2. PRINCESS IN TRAINING by Tammi Sauer
  3. THE FLYING FLEA, CALLIE, AND ME by Carol Wallace and Bill Wallace
  4. THE BUFFALO TRAIN RIDE by Desiree Morrison Webber

And on my Kindle:

  1. MY GIRLFRIEND BITES by Doug Solter
  2. LOVE IN THE BALANCE by Regina Jennings
  3. SHINE 1: CHILDHOOD’S END by William Bernhardt
  4. ARISE by Tara Hudson
  5. ELEGY by Tara Hudson
  6. DOUBLE CROSSED by Ally Carter

So that’s…18 books already? And I know there’s more that I want to read. Several are by authors already listed above, but there’s others that I haven’t even gotten to yet. So…I’m thinking if I grow up and commit to doing one each week, I’ve got almost five months of blog posts on here. Of course, the ones that still have to be read are a little more work, but it’s not like it’s going to be hard work.

I used to have the newspaper done each week on Wednesdays, and that seemed to work well enough. So. Every Wednesday. I will have a Oklahoma book review on this blog each and every Wednesday. At least until I get done with the ones I’ve already read.

So now I need to figure out how to schedule blog posts. Good thing I have six days to do this.

Busy times in Oklahoma

I’ve been so busy lately. Good busy. Well, and some time-wasting busy, but we won’t dwell on that right now.

I’ve read a ton of books by Oklahoma authors – so many, in fact, that it’s become intimidating to write all of them. I suppose I need to be a grown-up and write one every day or something, then set them up to post automatically. That’d be cool. It’s funny how I used to write very regularly for the newspaper, but it’s a little different for a blog. I was the editor and reporter at the paper, so I would put everything in and then think, Okay, I’ve got a 40-inch news hole left to fill. So…my city council story needs to be 40 inches. Let’s do this thing! And I would make magic happen.

But this blog is a little more…infinite, isn’t it?

scbwi okI’m also working as publicity chair for the Oklahoma Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators’ spring conference. It’s kind of fun to reconnect with people in the media. Hopefully we can get the word out about the conference and help open doors for others who want to write for children! Lots more information about that at the Oklahoma SCBWI website. Made a flyer to hang at libraries and bookstores too. I was a little nervous, because it looks suspiciously like it was made by a writer using Open Office, but our gracious regional advisor said it was just fine. So that was happiness.

Finally, I made a press release for a friend, for her to send out before school visits. That was fun too.

Two more things on my to-do list for today. One of those was write a blog post, ha ha. Check.

Now I need to get my pages ready for critique group tomorrow night.

I’ve still got almost an hour until midnight.

Let’s do this.

Observationally speaking

I think that the most interesting thing I’ve developed after getting seriously back into creative writing is my observational skills. I don’t know if I always saw things and forgot, or I didn’t even notice before.

Take today, for instance. I went to Walmart, yay. (No, really. Ugh.) So I bought some food and stuff, and found the best looking check-out line (almost…the shortest line was the tobacco check-out line, but I always feel vaguely guilty to be clogging that one up when the smokers only get that one if they’re buying) and I made small talk with Carol-the-cashier and moved my bags to the cart.

The cashier behind me (the cigarette line guy) said something to his customer about putting something in the buggy. I considered that, thinking about how I always say cart instead of buggy, and wondering if he was from a different part of the country. Swiped the credit card, got receipt (have a nice day-you too), smile, roll on.

Carefully steered the cart back toward the entrance. Almost had a traffic issue near the water fountains, when a man was squeezing past me on the left while a woman was trying to pass on the right. I stopped. Excuse me. Neither of them said anything in reply.

And then, I saw him. The guy. A young man. A stubbly dark brown beard – the kind of beard that is shaved on the top and the bottom, so it’s a narrow-ish line. Lighter stubble above and below the line, so he wasn’t religious about it or anything. Dressed casually. Jeans. Black hoodie. Hiking-style leather boots.

He was using one of those courtesy Walmart sanitizing wipes to clean the handle of his cart. Or buggy. The carts have this little ridge on them in the handlebar, on the plastic, and he was carefully using his thumb to clean the dip in the ridge.

I walked past, my eyes taking in everything as I turned toward the door.

Excuse me – my voice automatically said to the woman coming in the exit door, looking at me as if I was committing a crime to push my cart out the same way she was coming in. She said nothing in response.

Whatever. Still thinking about the guy.

He was young, cute, casual. What’s his story?

I don’t even use those wipes most of the time. They’re such a smart idea – don’t pick up everyone else’s germs along with the stuff you actually want to get – but I’m pretty lazy, and stopping to get a wipe is kind of a big deal. Plus you might have someone behind you, and holding up the line is a no-no. And what do you do with the wipe when you’re done? Usually the trash can is all full. I’ve dropped them in the bottom of the cart before, but that’s also less than an ideal situation.

So. The GUY. In my experience, guys aren’t even that concerned about germs, or being more than relatively clean. Wiping a cart seems like such a fastidious thing for a casually dressed guy to do.

I’m putting the bags in my car, sniffing to keep my nose from running in the bitter wind, when I think about what a fantastic tiny character trait wiping a cart would be in a novel. What an ideal way to show a little something about somebody – and the things it could mean! Is he a germaphobe? Just getting over being sick? Maybe he’s OCD. Maybe someone he loved died from some sort of communicable disease.

Maybe none of those. Maybe the handle just felt sticky. But if so, why not just get another cart? That opens up a whole new realm of ideas.

I think that before, I might have noticed this guy, but I wouldn’t have ended up dragging the idea of him home with me, obsessing over him, and tucking him into my mental file of things that are definitely going to end up in one of my stories.

I freaking love this.

 

Agent Day 2013

This month I got to enjoy my first SCBWI Agent Day, in Chandler, Oklahoma.

I had such a great time, and I’ve been thinking about it ever since, wondering how I’d like best to recap it. In the meantime, two of my friends beat me to it, writing wonderful blog posts about the day. I read both of those and thought, these are good. Maybe I shouldn’t write one. I probably can’t say anything that hasn’t already been said.

But then I remembered that I spent a decade working for a weekly newspaper. Lots of times big news happened in our little town right after the paper came out. Little stories would be all mine, but the big stuff would be covered by the big daily papers. I’d still have to write about it, five or six days later. It would just be that local perspective.

So I can at least do that. Even if I can’t be first, and I probably can’t be best, it can still be my perspective. My newbie thoughts on Agent Day. That’s something, I think.

I’ve got my notes from the day, and my outline, so I think I’m going to go over it kind of lazy-style and just start at the beginning. If you wanted the inverted pyramid, I’m sure you’d pick up a newspaper anyway.

It was held in Chandler since that’s in between Tulsa and OKC and it’s where our Regional Advisor, Anna Myers, lives. Our Agent Day is held at the First Baptist Church there. The church doesn’t charge us anything, so it’s less expensive than the spring conference. That’s nice. I drove up with friends and got to use my new Pikepass for the first time, so that was fun and fancy.

The first speaker was Hannah Harrison, who is an incredible author/illustrator and has four books currently in various stages of publication. hannah harrison(She read Extraordinary Jane  at the OKC Schmooze in September and it was fantastic and I love it.) She is also extremely super adorable – like almost overly so – but somehow it works for her and you don’t want to maim her or anything for it.

My notes are sketchy from Hannah’s talk, and it’s entirely all her fault because it was too entertaining and fun. The main point she wanted to pass on to all of us was to not waste your opportunities for advancement. Make the most of your chances to further your career, and don’t procrastinate if this is what you want to do. It’s good advice.

Other things I got from her speech (besides smiles) included:

* Interest in her childhood artwork. It caused me to look at my six-year-old’s work with new eyes. I have noticed that my littlest girl seems to have a different gift for art than the older children, but I haven’t done much about it. I’m now trying to focus on that more now, and encourage her, the way Hannah’s parents and educators did. Whether my daughter will continue with art or not, I need to be better aware of it.

* Don’t shut doors that are open for you, just because you think there is a “right” way to do something. Explore different options that lead to the result you want.

I sure am looking forward to getting my hands on Hannah’s books and maybe getting to review them right here on this blog. Why not, right?

Hannah Harrison’s web site

The agents were next.

Anna got three super agents for us, and I was excited to hear from each of them. We had Natalie Fischer Lakosil, Bradford Literary Agency; Emily Mitchell, Wernick & Pratt Literary Agency; and Danielle Smith, Foreword Literary.

Ugh. How distressing. I wrote all of this in October. OCTOBER. 

And then I didn’t get around to finishing. I saved the draft, and thought I’d get around to it later. Later didn’t come.

Instead, I got busy writing my new novel, which I’m pretty excited about. I’m 35,000 words into it. That’s awesome.

But this blog post is hanging over my head. I haven’t even posted anything else (except for the one NaNo post) because I knew I needed to finish this first.

Today I decided I was just going to delete it and go on from here. And then I actually got on here and read it, and saw that it wasn’t that terrible. Deleting it might not be the best idea after all.

I cannot write that much more about Agent Day, which stinks, because it was a great day. But it’s too far in the past now. I’m not going to wax on and on about the agents, even though they were seriously awesome. Anyone who gets the opportunity to visit with them or hear them speak should.

I do, however, have to mention the other Oklahoma speaker, local author Gwendolyn Hooks. I love Gwen. I am so lucky because she’s one of my critique partners.

Her first book, Can I Have a Pet?, just happens to be my six year old daughter’s favorite book. I did not coerce the child to love the book; it just happened that way. It’s also the first book that she read on her own. I think that it’s sort of wonderful that her first book was written by a friend.

So Gwendolyn told the story that led her to publication, and it was warm, and funny, and perfect, just like she is. She made each of us feel like she was sitting down and chatting with a friend.

Gwen’s upcoming book is Vivien Thomas – The Man Who Saved the Blue Babies. This picture book biography tells the story of a young African American man who, without a medical degree or a college education, designed the surgical technique that showed doctors how to operate on children born with Tetralogy of Fallot, or ‘Blue Babies.” It will be published by Lee and Low in spring 2015.

And…when I went looking for the links for this post, I noticed that she’s completely redone her website! Go see! Maybe that’s why I put off publishing this post for so long.

Even though it’s been weeks and weeks, one thing has stuck with me since listening to Gwen’s speech. She told us that if you love an idea, never give up on it. This resonated with me. One of my novels has aspects that sometimes seem so different that I wonder if I’ll ever be able to interest anyone in it. I love it. I think that it’s amazing. But I don’t know if I’ll ever find the person who’ll be willing to give it a chance. When Gwen said what she did, she reminded me to not give up on it. I can keep working on other, more marketable projects, but I can’t let go of that book that I love so much. I’ll keep trying to get it where it should be, and someday I’ll find the person who understands it as much as I do!

NaNoWriMo2013

It’s National Novel Writing Month!

I’m writing a novel!

I’m not taking part in National Novel Writing Month. Not this year.

I think NaNoWriMo is awesome. It’s a really cool way for people to get it going, and get that novel done. It’s great for perfectionists to stop editing their pages to death and get that rough draft on paper. It’s great for people who don’t think they can actually write a novel to see how a couple thousand words a day can really make a whole novel in just 30 days.

I tried it last year. I wrote Pairs in less than a month in July 2012, so I figured I could do it, no sweat. I wanted to try something new, so I went with a third person middle grade novel. It turned out to be The Clarinet Clique. 

It went all right. About two-thirds of the way through I realized I had two characters I really didn’t need, and I had to make that deadline, so I just combined them in with the others and went on from there. I figured I’d go back and cut them out later. I finished NaNo…sort of. I guess I didn’t actually “win,” because the novel didn’t quite reach 50K, even though I finished it. I could have stretched it, but that seemed stupid, since it was complete to me.

Now that novel is the only one I haven’t shared with anyone. I haven’t gone back and made those changes. It’s not that I don’t think I can do it – I know I can. I’ve read it again, and it’s a pretty good little book, in my oh-so-valuable opinion. I just don’t know if I really want to have a middle grade novel. I’m starting to understand the value in focusing on the type of writing you enjoy the most. I truly enjoy young adult the most. I tried my hand at middle grade because a lot of agents were mentioning how much they wanted to see more middle grade. I just like young adult better. So…I’m just waiting on this book to see what I really want to do with my writing as a whole. If I’d rather rewrite it into a young adult, I’d rather do it all at once, instead of writing it into a better middle grade and then tearing it into a whole new young adult.

Wait. This was about NaNo.

Yeah. I’m writing this awesome new young adult contemporary that’s about these star crossed lovers / teen kids of modern political candidates. I’m in love with it. Thinking about the characters every waking moment…making up extra dialogue and scenes for them when I’m not actually writing things down…that sort of thing. Everybody around me seems to be doing NaNo, but I’m not. NaNo seemed too stressful for perfectionist me last year. If I didn’t get my 1,667 every day, I was all down on myself and trying to catch up. It stunk. Instead, I just outlined until I was bored with outlining, and then I started, around the last week of October. Now I’m almost 20,000 words in. That’s hooray times for me.

And…if I keep it up, I might not have to write 1,667 words when I want to be sleeping off Thanksgiving dinner later this month, bonus!